Fizzi Posted 18 years ago
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Can somebody please comments my sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi
1- Although companies have the right to promote their products, the promotion should be fair, accurate and ethical manner.
2- The evidence highlights that globally nutrition companies do not always adhere to this principal.
3-Adding to the evidence, our review indicates the need for a global standard of regulations. An international study to compare the effects of different regulatory frameworks and to know where the regulatory system works the best should be conducted.
4-The study would provide governments evidence of advantages and drawbacks of different systems. The information is crucial in order to overcome weaknesses in the existing regulations and establishing a global standard of regulations for nutrional promotion.
Regards,
Fizzi
1- Although companies have the right to promote their products, the promotion should be fair, accurate and ethical manner.
2- The evidence highlights that globally nutrition companies do not always adhere to this principal.
3-Adding to the evidence, our review indicates the need for a global standard of regulations. An international study to compare the effects of different regulatory frameworks and to know where the regulatory system works the best should be conducted.
4-The study would provide governments evidence of advantages and drawbacks of different systems. The information is crucial in order to overcome weaknesses in the existing regulations and establishing a global standard of regulations for nutrional promotion.
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Can somebody please comment on my sentences? Regards, Fizzi 1- Although companies have the right to promote their products, the promotion should be in a fair, accurate and ethical manner. 2- The evidence highlights that globally pharmaceutical companies do not always adhere to this principle .
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Can somebody please comment on my sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi
1- Although companies have the right to promote their products, the promotion should be in a fair, accurate and ethical manner.
2- The evidence highlights that globally pharmaceutical companies do not always adhere to this principle.
3- Adding to the evidence, our review
Can somebody please comment on my sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi
1- Although companies have the right to promote their products, the promotion should be in a fair, accurate and ethical manner.
2- The evidence highlights that globally pharmaceutical companies do not always adhere to this principle.
3- Adding to the evidence, our review
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