Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Commas
So I am writing a job application and I initially wrote it like this:
"I am seeking immediate work, within a company, that will constantly challenge me; thus providing a platform where I am forced to adapt, and grow as an individual."
I was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right?
Top answer
anonymous I was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right? Yes.
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anonymousI was told to remove the first two commas and place a comma in stead of the semi-colon. Does that seem right?
Yes. And you need to remove the last comma as well (the one before "and grow").
CJ
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