Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Color pictures
Please check the following paragraph.
This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting beautiful pictures about nature. Because he likes to color pictures in different colors, his paintings/pictures are usually colorful. I appreciate them very much.
This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting beautiful pictures about nature. Because he likes to color pictures in different colors, his paintings/pictures are usually colorful. I appreciate them very much.
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I have underlined some problems: This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting beautiful pictures about nature.
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I have underlined some problems:
This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting beautiful pictures about nature. Because he likes to color pictures in different colors, his paintings/pictures are usually colorful. I appreciate them very much.
This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting beautiful pictures about nature. Because he likes to color pictures in different colors, his paintings/pictures are usually colorful. I appreciate them very much.
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This is my grandfather and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting scenes from nature. He uses a broad palette, so his artwork is usually vividly colourful. I appreciate them very much.
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This is my grandfather, and his sign is Leo. He is a great artist. He is good at painting scenes from nature. He uses a broad palette, so his artwork is usually vividly colourful. I appreciate it very much.
Good revision!
Good revision!
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