Claiming letter

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Clive · Accepted Answer

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Clive

Dear Mr. Wolff,

I am writing to you in regard to a claim submitted on 15^th April 2007, for which I received a denial on 30^th May 2007.

I am requesting your reconsideration of this denial. The medical expenses for an amount of $5,000 were due to an act of humanity rather than a reckless exposure to danger as you suggested in your letter. Therefore, the terms of your do not apply in this case. <<< this seems a legal matter. Perhaps you should say 'should not apply'? As you can read in the enclosed newspaper article, I rescued a little boy from the jaws of twelve alligators. I certainly put at risk my own life, but I did it in order to save the life of this child. I appeal to the generosity and sense of humanity which are widely known to be hallmarks of the XYZ Insurance Company's dealings with the public.

Additionally, the price for the pair of shoes I had to buy in Florida was £30. However, the exchange rate published by Reuters is £0.6 for 1 dollar, so the amount should have been £60. Is your math correct here? Should one of these prices be in dollars?

Finally, I feel very disappointed for the delay in answering my letter I wouldn't say this. Be nice!

If you want to have fun, you could add a paragraph that subtly suggests the insurance company would look bad in the newspapers if word about their denial of a hero's claim leaks out.

If there is any additional information I can provide to you that would expedite this matter, please feel free to contact me. Thank you for your time and assistance.

Yours sincerely,

John Smith

Enclosures:

Medical expenses

An article from the Fort Lauderdale Post, which explains the details of the incident.

Exchange rates from Reuters

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