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Hi ,
The amazing cellular phone
As long as I live,I will never forget the day when I have stopped with my car alone in a dark road.Never I have thought that my cellular
phone could help me.
It all began right after I got my driving license.It was the first time I was allowed to drive without an experienced driver.I felt confident.
Suddenly,my cell phone didn't find in my pocket.it probably fell down whem my car suddenly stopped in a dangerous dark road.
I was in away to airport and nobody knew that I flied for few days in my work.
All of a sudden,I found out my cell phone.
After I called my friend arrived in halp hour.
The memory of this frightening experience will stay with me forever.This case taught a lesson that no matter when you go , take your cell phone.
Thanks for helpers.
The amazing cellular phone
As long as I live,I will never forget the day when I have stopped with my car alone in a dark road.Never I have thought that my cellular
phone could help me.
It all began right after I got my driving license.It was the first time I was allowed to drive without an experienced driver.I felt confident.
Suddenly,my cell phone didn't find in my pocket.it probably fell down whem my car suddenly stopped in a dangerous dark road.
I was in away to airport and nobody knew that I flied for few days in my work.
All of a sudden,I found out my cell phone.
After I called my friend arrived in halp hour.
The memory of this frightening experience will stay with me forever.This case taught a lesson that no matter when you go , take your cell phone.
Thanks for helpers.
Top answer
Never had I thought that my cellular phone could help me. It all began right after I got my driving license. It was the first time I was allowed to drive without an experienced driver.
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Hi,
The amazing cellular phone
As long as I live, I will never forget the day when my car stalled, alone on a dark road.Never had I thought that my cellular
phone could help me.
It all began right after I got my driving license. It was the first time I was allowed to drive without an experienced driver. I felt confident.
Suddenly, I couldn't find my cell phone
The amazing cellular phone
As long as I live, I will never forget the day when my car stalled, alone on a dark road.Never had I thought that my cellular
phone could help me.
It all began right after I got my driving license. It was the first time I was allowed to drive without an experienced driver. I felt confident.
Suddenly, I couldn't find my cell phone
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"I was on my way to the airport and nobody knew that I flied for few days in my work. <<< What do you mean?
All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
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My repair:
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody from my friends knew that I
All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
"
My repair:
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody from my friends knew that I
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Hi,
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody knew that I flied for few days in my work. <<< What do you mean?
All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
"
My repair:
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody from my friends knew
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody knew that I flied for few days in my work. <<< What do you mean?
All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
"
My repair:
"I was on my way to the airport and nobody from my friends knew
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Thanks ,
could I change it ?
"I was on my way to the airport and none of my friends knew that I would fly to london. All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
can I change " was going to " with "would" ?
Thanks
could I change it ?
"I was on my way to the airport and none of my friends knew that I would fly to london. All of a sudden, I found it. After I called, my friend arrived in half an hour.
can I change " was going to " with "would" ?
Thanks
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Hi,
Yes, but I prefer 'was going to'. It conveys more of the idea that you had a plan to fly to London.
Clive
Yes, but I prefer 'was going to'. It conveys more of the idea that you had a plan to fly to London.
Clive
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