Ellisa Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
check the grammar!
Hello teachers!
I've done my writing homework about the most impressive place I've visited.
It's kind of blog style.
Please check the grammar.
Thanks in advance!
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The greatest building in the world.
29-8-2008
It was an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeve t-shirt not to be burn. From yesterday, I had butterflies in my stomach with high expectations of watching the Eiffel Tower. I took off the bus and right across the street, there was that, the Eiffel Tower!!! I was told that the Eiffel Tower is not a great building but just a big metal and pointy. However, it was an amazing structure to me that I cannot take off my eyes of it! Suddenly I came up with this thinking. If I was here with my mom, I would be much happier than now. I'm quiet sure that she and I would hug each other and make a fuss. After taking some great pictures with my friend, I decided to come here again in a few years with my boy-friend. After half an hour, it was a great pity that I need to leave there. It was hard to fight back my tears even.
I realized that no matter what people say,
it is nevertheless the truth what I'm seeing. You know what? The Eiffel Tower is the greatest building in the world ever.
I've done my writing homework about the most impressive place I've visited.
It's kind of blog style.
Please check the grammar.
Thanks in advance!
StartFragment>
The greatest building in the world.
29-8-2008
It was an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeve t-shirt not to be burn. From yesterday, I had butterflies in my stomach with high expectations of watching the Eiffel Tower. I took off the bus and right across the street, there was that, the Eiffel Tower!!! I was told that the Eiffel Tower is not a great building but just a big metal and pointy. However, it was an amazing structure to me that I cannot take off my eyes of it! Suddenly I came up with this thinking. If I was here with my mom, I would be much happier than now. I'm quiet sure that she and I would hug each other and make a fuss. After taking some great pictures with my friend, I decided to come here again in a few years with my boy-friend. After half an hour, it was a great pity that I need to leave there. It was hard to fight back my tears even.
I realized that no matter what people say,
it is nevertheless the truth what I'm seeing. You know what? The Eiffel Tower is the greatest building in the world ever.
Top answer
Hi, The greatest building in the world. 29-8-2008 It was such an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeved t-shirt so as not to be burnt. From Since yesterday, I'd had butterflies in my stomach, with high expectations of watching seeing the Eiffel Tower.
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Hi,
The greatest building in the world.
29-8-2008
It was such an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeved t-shirt so as not to be burnt. From Since yesterday, I'd had butterflies in my stomach, with high expectations of watching seeing the Eiffel Tower. I took had got off the bus and, there, right across the street,
The greatest building in the world.
29-8-2008
It was such an incredibly sunny day that I needed to wear a long sleeved t-shirt so as not to be burnt.
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