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Question

1. I would like to have a change, in order to learn new experiences.
2. A: Why haven't you gone home yet?
B: Because nobody comes to pick me up.

3. From the below sentences, you make another sentence in a supposition.
4. I am sorry that I disturbed you yesterday. I didn't know you were busy.
- If I had known you were busy, I wouldn't have disturbed you.

5. A: I was very sorry to hear about your wife's illness. Mr. Jim. How is she doing?
B: She is still in the hospital, but getting better now, and the doctor said she could go home
the next week.
6. I have heard that you were awarded a scholarship at Oxford University, Is that right?

7. Two minutes ago a friend of mine gave me a phone call and I didn't answer her telephone.
Afterwards she sent a message to me and she asked "Why didn't you answer my telephone?
Did you know you hurt my feelings?"

- Can I say like this to her or not?
I didn't intend to hurt your your feelings at all. The reason I didn't answer your telephone
because at that time I hadn't heard my mobile phone's voice.

Feebs11 · Accepted Answer

Kittixay1. I would like to have a change, in order to learn new experiences. ok

2. A: Why haven't you gone home yet?
B: Because nobody comes to pick me up. has come

3. From the below sentences, you make another sentence in a supposition. From the sentences below, make another sentence [what is meant by "in a supposition"?]

4. I am sorry that I disturbed you yesterday. I didn't know you were busy. ok
- If I had known you were busy, I wouldn't have disturbed you. ok

5. A: I was very sorry to hear about your wife's illness, Mr. Jim. How is she doing? ok
B: She is still in the hospital but getting better now, and the doctor said she could go home ~~the~~ next week. ok

6. I have heard that you were awarded a scholarship at Oxford University. Is that right? ok

7. Two minutes ago a friend of mine gave me a phone call and I didn't answer her telephone. called me on the phone but I didn't answer it.
Afterwards she sent a message to me and she asked "Why didn't you answer my ~~telephone~~? call
Did you know you hurt my feelings?"

- Can I say ~~like~~ this to her or not?
I didn't intend to hurt your your feelings at all. The reason I didn't answer your ~~telephone~~
because at that time I hadn't heard my mobile phone's voice. call // was because // ring tone

CalifJim · Answer

The items in red are errors. Those in blue are suggested changes.

1. I would like to ~~have~~ make a change in my life, in order to ~~learn~~ have new experiences.
You don't learn an experience; you have an experience.

2. A: Why haven't you gone home yet?
B: Because nobody ~~comes~~ has come to pick me up.

3. From the below sentences, you make another sentence in a supposition.
??? I'm not sure what you mean here. Maybe:
From the sentences below, make conditional sentences.
4. I am sorry that I disturbed you yesterday. I didn't know you were busy. Good.
- If I had known you were busy, I wouldn't have disturbed you. Good.

5. A: I was very sorry to hear about your wife's illness, . Mr. Jim. How is she doing?
B: She is still in the hospital, but getting better now, and the doctor said she could go home
~~the~~ next week.
6. I have heard that you were awarded a scholarship at Oxford University. , Is that right?

7. Two minutes ago a friend of mine ~~gave me a phone call~~ phoned/called me, and I didn't answer (her call ~~telephone)~~. didn't answer her call or didn't answer or didn't answer [the / my] [phone/telephone].

She answers her phone when her phone rings.
You answer your phone when your phone rings.
If your phone is ringing, you don't answer her phone. To do that you would have to be where she is.
But if you were visiting her, and her phone rang, and she was too busy to come to the phone, you could answer her phone for her (in her place) and tell the caller to wait until she can come to the phone.

Afterwards she sent a message to me and ~~she~~ asked "Why didn't you answer (my call ~~telephone~~)?
Did you know you hurt my feelings?"

- Can I say ~~like~~ this to her or not? [Can I say this (to her) (or not)? or Can I say something like this (to her) (or not)?]
I didn't intend to hurt your your feelings at all. ~~The reason~~ I didn't answer (your call ~~telephone~~)
because ~~at that time I hadn't heard my mobile phone's voice.~~ I didn't hear the phone ring.

You have two choices:

I didn't answer because I didn't hear the phone (ring).
The reason I didn't answer was that I didn't hear the phone (ring).

CJ

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