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Essay & Composition Writing
Changes- could you please check this essay and let me know mistakes. Thank you!
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00 People normally resist making change, which might prevent us from grow and competiveness. 02 br
00 Even if you have no problem with current life, nobody surely say you will be still OK tomorrow since the world changes so rapidly. 02 br
00 Without mobile phone, and e-mail address, it is very hard to communicate with anyone but it was nothing like that in 20 years ago. 02 br
00 If you do not change, you will so behind of the area, and can not get advantages of modern technology, and fail to deal with peoples in modern society. In this international competitive world, you will be looser if you are just doing the same every day and no improvement. 02 br
00 Because the market and demand are always changed, even product A was a big hit, market would not want it anymore because new product B sold by competitor fits well for the new market demand, low price or better quality. 02 br
00 Ok, there is some old fashioned business like Kabuki performer, however, Kabuki has been changed to attract young customers, and go abroad to perform to attract foreigner. There are changes even in such a historical field to survive. 02 br
00 Afraid of new thing is normal reaction because you do not know if it is safe. People says “curiosity kill the cat”, so better stay at home and do nothing. However, you have to lean how to get the food and go out from a warn/sweet home. To release your worry for the change, you try to see the benefit if you make change. You might just have doing it but it might not have been the best way. You can start with very easy step, and once you know the change won’t hart you but improve you, you became not afraid of chance of the change. Enjoy a change, enjoy something new, and enjoy new yourself. 0-
02 br
00 People normally resist making change, which might prevent us from grow and competiveness. 02 br
00 Even if you have no problem with current life, nobody surely say you will be still OK tomorrow since the world changes so rapidly. 02 br
00 Without mobile phone, and e-mail address, it is very hard to communicate with anyone but it was nothing like that in 20 years ago. 02 br
00 If you do not change, you will so behind of the area, and can not get advantages of modern technology, and fail to deal with peoples in modern society. In this international competitive world, you will be looser if you are just doing the same every day and no improvement. 02 br
00 Because the market and demand are always changed, even product A was a big hit, market would not want it anymore because new product B sold by competitor fits well for the new market demand, low price or better quality. 02 br
00 Ok, there is some old fashioned business like Kabuki performer, however, Kabuki has been changed to attract young customers, and go abroad to perform to attract foreigner. There are changes even in such a historical field to survive. 02 br
00 Afraid of new thing is normal reaction because you do not know if it is safe. People says “curiosity kill the cat”, so better stay at home and do nothing. However, you have to lean how to get the food and go out from a warn/sweet home. To release your worry for the change, you try to see the benefit if you make change. You might just have doing it but it might not have been the best way. You can start with very easy step, and once you know the change won’t hart you but improve you, you became not afraid of chance of the change. Enjoy a change, enjoy something new, and enjoy new yourself. 0-
Top answer
1 b 00 Whether the change be drastic or mild, typically people in general, try to avoid as much change as possible. To many scholars, change is the foundation of learning, where new idea's and prospective hope comes into play for our future, without it we prevent ourselves growth, and lack the ambition to set out competitively. Life continues to change at a rapid rate, and we can never be certain how much time we have on earth, and we all can admit learning the ways that are going to keep us moving forward and thus not comming to a halt, involves keeping the "new" and "fresh" technologies innovativeness in our pocket.
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1 b 00 Whether the change be drastic or mild, typically people in general, try to avoid as much change as possible. To many scholars, change is the foundation of learning, where new idea's and prospective hope comes into play for our future, without it we prevent ourselves growth, and lack the ambition to set out competitively. Life continues to change at a rapid rate, and we can never be c
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