Cardigan

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I wrote about one of my favorite cardigans. I was trying to explain its figure. Could you read and correct them for me?

Thank you.

I have this 7-year-old light green color cardigan.

Its fabric thin and has two small pockets for decoration on the bottom which I hardly put things in them. It fits a little tight on me and shows the body line. The thin light green color suede bias is on the top of the pocket and on the buttonhole row.

I wear green turtleneck shirt in winter and sleeveless top in summer in it.

It matches well with any colors such as green, black, dark blue.

I thought it is a little colorful at the first time but it is getting older with me, we get long together well.

I like to wear a cardigan. It is light, comfortable.

I can go any where formal or informal places wearing it.

I put an ID card necklace in the cardigan at work otherwise the ID card will dance around with my movement.

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

I have this 7-year-old light green color cardigan. Its fabric is thin and it has two small pockets for decoration on the bottom which I hardly ever put things in them. It fits a little tightly on me and shows my body line. It has a light green suede trim on the top of the pocket and on the buttonhole row.

I wear a green turtleneck shirt under it in winter and a sleeveless top in summer.

It matches well with any color such as green, black or dark blue.

I thought it was a little too colorful at first but as it is getting older with me, we get long together well.

I like to wear my cardigan. It is light and comfortable.

I can go to formal or informal places wearing it.

I wear my ID card necklace inside the cardigan at work otherwise the ID card dances around with my movement.

An Jiyoung · Answer

Thank you for the correction. I rewrite and reorganized the sentences. Does it make a sense?

I like to wear a cardigan. It is light and comfortable.

I can go to formal or informal places wearing it.

I have this 7-year-old light green color cardigan. Its fabric is thin and it has two small pockets for decoration on the bottom which I hardly ever put things in them. It fits a little tightly on me and shows my body line. It has a light green suede trim on the top of the pocket and on the buttonhole row.

I wear a green turtleneck shirt under it in winter and a sleeveless top in summer.

It matches well with any color such as green, black or dark blue.

I thought it was a little too colorful at first but as it is getting older with me, we get along together well.

I wear my ID card necklace inside the cardigan at work otherwise the ID card dances around with my movement. That's another reason I like to wear the cardigan.

Nona the brit · Answer

It looks good now. This sentence is a little clumsy though, not exactly incorrect, but poor style so you might want to rework it.

I thought it was a little too colorful at first but as it is getting older with me, we get along together well.

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