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I need to say this to the hotel person, makes any sense?

It cost 10 dollars to get hooked up connected to the internet for 24hours from your room. What I don't know is whether it cost 10 dollars for any number of computer hooked up to the wifi or if it's per computer. I tried hooking up my second computer to the wifi but it wouldn't work without my accepting the terms and paying another 10 dollars. I called down and asked the reception desk if it was 10 dollars for one or more computers. The receptionist said it was 10 for several computers. I then proceeded to accept the terms on the second computer and finally connect to the internet. 24 hours later, the first computer I connect to internet got cut off. If I was only going to get charged 10 for both computer, both computers would have gotten cut off at the same time. But that wasn't the case> The second computer got cut off 10 minutes after the first. I'm wondering whether you are going to charge me twice or once?

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

I need to say this to the hotel person, does it make any sense?

It costs 10 dollars per day for an internet connection from your room. What I don't know is if this charge is $10 per computer or $10 for the room. I tried hooking up my second computer to the wifi but it wouldn't work without my accepting the terms and paying another 10 dollars. I called down and asked the reception desk if it was 10 dollars for one or more computers. The receptionist said it was lt;/b>10 for several computers. I then proceeded to accept the terms on the second computer and finally connected to the internet. 24 hours later, the first computer I connected to internet got cut off. If I were only going to be charged lt;/b>10 for both computers, both computers should have been cut off at the same time. But that wasn't the case. The second computer got cut off 10 minutes after the first. I'm wondering whether you are going to charge me $20 or only $10 for the one-day connection.

(I'll wager that this is what is going on.

A 24 hour clock starts ticking when you connect each computer to the Internet. The second computer was connected 10 minutes later than the first one, so its "24 hour" time period ended 10 minutes later than the first. And since your room used an internet connection for 24 hours + 10 minutes, you probably will be charged for 2 days. If you had disconnected both computers within the same 24-hour period, you would only be charged $10.)

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