Wangqh2696122 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Can you help me check the short essay?
Is it worthwhile for man to explore space?
In September, 2008,Chinasuccessfully launched three astronauts into space and realized man’s long-cherished dream of spacewalk.
The completion of the most challenging mission has opened a new chapter forChina’s manned space industry. Ideally, we will not only better understand space but make full use of it as well. However, there are those who frown upon the idea. They may cite the following example to prove their point: In February, 2003,America’s spacecraft crashed, in which all the seven astronauts lost their lives. Admittedly, this is a tragedy in the history of space exploration, but, as we know, any undertaking involves a certain degree of risks. What counts is how much it can benefit mankind. Space exploration not only benefits us but our generations to come as well.
Therefore, it is rewarding to explore space.
In September, 2008,Chinasuccessfully launched three astronauts into space and realized man’s long-cherished dream of spacewalk.
The completion of the most challenging mission has opened a new chapter forChina’s manned space industry. Ideally, we will not only better understand space but make full use of it as well. However, there are those who frown upon the idea. They may cite the following example to prove their point: In February, 2003,America’s spacecraft crashed, in which all the seven astronauts lost their lives. Admittedly, this is a tragedy in the history of space exploration, but, as we know, any undertaking involves a certain degree of risks. What counts is how much it can benefit mankind. Space exploration not only benefits us but our generations to come as well.
Therefore, it is rewarding to explore space.
Top answer
Hi again Please, pay attention to this sentences " Ideally, we will not only better understand space but make full use of it as well ", and this "Space exploration not only benefits us but our generations to come as well". Regards Nata
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Hi again
Please, pay attention to this sentences "Ideally, we will not only better understand space but make full use of it as well", and this "Space exploration not only benefits us but our generations to come as well".
Regards
Nata
Please, pay attention to this sentences "Ideally, we will not only better understand space but make full use of it as well", and this "Space exploration not only benefits us but our generations to come as well".
Regards
Nata
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well, we usually have not only .... but also. As well... is somehow odd to me. Perhaps you need to formulate these two sentences differently.
Regards
Nata
Regards
Nata
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