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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Can you correct sentence?

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Can you correct sentence?
Is this a perfect sentence in term of grammar?
The fact that he takes such good care of his pets speaks volumes about how well he would take care of a child had he had one.
  

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Yes, but it is unnecessarily convoluted. The fact that he cares so well for his pets shows how well he would care for a child.

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Yes, but it is unnecessarily convoluted.

The fact that he cares so well for his pets shows how well he would care for a child.