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Jasmin1983 Posted 4 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can you correct my essay to make it better.

I'd like to tell you about my room.

I have a light yellow color for my room to make it look . I don't share with anyone in my family. My room is next to my sister's room and in front of the bathroom. It has a lots of things, there is a bed in the corner. My desk is next to the bed. There are some picture about my family on the wall. There is a bookcase is next to my bed. I also have some rubic cube to play in free time. My room is just simple but I love it very much.

  
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