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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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I was taking out lots of glass bottles after a party. Some of the bottles weren't totally empty. There was an end in each bottle. I took a plastic trash bag and put the 40 bottles of beer in the bag to take them out. When I got outside my apartment, I realized that the plastic bag was leaking. It was going to leave a trail that would lead to my front door. I knew I would have to mop up the trail, at least the bit that would give away that it was I who had left the trail of beer. Had I doubled the trash bag, it would have less likely leaked/ less chance of it leaking , as for it to leak, the holes in the bag would have had to been one on top of the other.

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