Can someone pls pls check my Cover Letter?

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0 Hi, I'm trying to apply for an upcoming nursing training program and would appreciate if someone can check my cover letter b4 I send it. Thank you so much!!! its posted below:02br02br00I am writing to express my great interest and  enthusiasm in obtaining a position in 123 Hospital’s perinatal training program.00 00I’m a capable and experience register nurse with  an excellent education from 345 College.00 00Since graduating I have developed and practiced my nursing skills as a  registered nurse on a Med/Surge unit at 00.00 00In addition to my Med/Surge experience, I have  precepted at ABC’s Labor and Delivery unit under the direct supervision from  the Perinatal Clinical Nurse Specialist. 02br02br00A few of the skills I have developed while precepting  on a high acute Labor and Delivery unit are Fetal Heart Monitoring, assisting  with epidural placement, complicated births, cesarean birth, alternative pain  management and monitoring mother and baby for post partum complications.00 00Additionally, to these perinatal skills, I  can also contribute the knowledge I have developed while working as a Med/Surge  RN, such as blood transfusion, IV administration, aseptic techniques, wound  care, phlebotomy, advocating for the patient and acting as an intermediary  between family, patients and physicians.02br02br00As a nurse I enjoy  the incredible relationship that I have developed with my patients. I  especially enjoyed the special companionship and bonding that perinatal nurses  develop with laboring mothers and their families.00 00I thoroughly enjoyed this experience and  would like to continue the skills and memories I have acquired in my  preceptorship and as a med-surge nurse and bring them to such an esteem  teaching hospital as UCSF. 02br02br00I would like to schedule an interview with you at  your earliest convenience for an opportunity to discuss my other skills and abilities.00 00My phone number is (999) 999-9999, and e-mail  is 01span00Email Removed02span00. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your  time and consideration.0-

Clive · Accepted Answer

0Hi,02br
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00The term 'cover letter' means a letter that is sent along with a copy of your resume.02br
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00Are you sending a resume with this, or is this letter meant to contain all of the relevant information about you, your skills and your work history?02br
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00Best wishes Clive0-

Giniper · Answer

0 Oh yes, there is a resume, its an old resume that I had the career center look at and corrected before I graduated from nursing school, but unfortunately since I'm not a student anymore, I can't use the career center's resources again to correct my cover letter.  Thank you very much. Gini 0-

Clive · Answer

0Hi Gini,02br
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00Sorry, I don't understand. Are you sending just this letter, or sending both this letter and a resume?02br
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00Clive0-

Giniper · Answer

0Hi Clive,02br
00I will send my old resume with this letter. Thank you. Gini 0-

Clive · Answer

0Hi Gini,02br
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01font00I am writing to express my great interest in and enthusiasm about obtaining a position in 123 Hospital’s perinatal training program.00 00I am a capable and experienced Registered Nurse with an excellent education from 345 College.00 00Since graduating, I have developed and practiced my nursing skills as an RN in a Med/Surge unit at ABC Medical Center.00 00In addition to my Med/Surge experience, I have 01font00precepted02font00 01font01i01u00wrong word? or is it a technical word? Worked ??02u02i02font00 in ABC’s Labor and Delivery unit under the direct supervision of the Perinatal 01font00is it perinatal or prenatal ? 02font00Clinical Nurse Specialist. 02font02br
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01font00A few of the skills I have developed while 01font00precepting02font00 in a high01font00ly?02font00 acute Labor and Delivery unit are Fetal Heart Monitoring, assisting with epidural placement, dealing with complicated and cesarean births, managing alternative pain control, and monitoring mother and baby for post-partum complications.00 00In addition to these perinatal skills, I can also contribute the knowledge I have developed while working as a Med/Surge RN, such as blood transfusion, IV administration, aseptic techniques, wound care, phlebotomy, advocating for the patient and acting as an intermediary between family, patients and physicians.02font02br
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01font00As a nurse I enjoy the incredible relationship that I have developed with my patients. I especially enjoy the special companionship and bonding that perinatal nurses develop with laboring mothers and their families.00 00I thoroughly enjoy this experience and would like to continue to develop the skills I have acquired in my preceptorship and as a med-surge nurse. I hope to bring them to such an esteemed teaching hospital as UCSF. 02font02br
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01font00I would like to schedule an interview with you at your earliest convenience for an opportunity to discuss my application, as well as my other skills and abilities as outlined in my attached00 resume.. 00My phone number is (999) 999-99, and my e-mail is Google@gmail.com. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.02font02br
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00Good luck with this. If you have any more questions, please post again.02br
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00Clive0-

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