Can someone help me proof-read a one page letter?

Can someone help me proof-read a one page letter (cover letter)?

Dear Mr. ***,

I have been developing my talents as a Certified Trainee Appraiser with a Commercial Real Estate Appraisal Firm. The path that the Principals have put me on does not offer enough challenge. The talents and skills I have acquired from other endeavors in life are not being used to there potential. I have received awards from the National Aeronautics Space Administration (NASA) for producing documents that needed to be error free and approved by NASA Quality Department. The quick pace environment I thrive in is also not present.

I would greatly like to apply my skills and time to increase your company’s growth. Using my talents for attention to details; developed by my finance and computer experience, my self-motivation; that gets me to my goals, and my creative perceptive nature; supported by years of Architectural Drawing in high school and taking Architectural elective classes in college.

My life revolves around real estate. A close friend, of ten years, is a real estate agent who I have helped numerous times showing houses. It has also been a task of mine to locate properties on the Multiple Listing Service. Also several people, close to me are Mortgage Brokers. Anticipating that I would have to generate clients, I have a capable market to draw from. As well I plan on marketing myself to many different groups.

I look forward to talking with you further about opportunities at *** Inc. I can be reached best by e-mail at ***@yahoo.com or at my home phone number ###.###.####. You can also try ###.###.#### a cell phone number.