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0 I would be grateful if someone could check this short passage for me. I really need it !02br
00One of the sources of the theater’s appeal is the similarity between enjoying movies and listening to stories. 02br
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00 00In early times, stories were considered best entertained00 00around the fire. There were heroes with wonderful actions and glorious victories that dazzled hearers. Nowadays, the audiences can enjoy such stories by another mean: instead of gathering around the fires as before, they concentrate in theaters. There, people follow every little change in the contests between two opposing sides, then becoming involved in the stories being illustrated. That keep them wait till the last moments to see the outcomes of the movies0-