Guest Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
Can anyone review my following letter
Hi,Urvashi,
Thanks for Your call and invitation. I am very sorry for not coming to ‘Rain’ or whatever it is. I was also hesitating and feeling shy in meeting you but I must have come there. It was a golden opportunity of meeting you.
Believe me,my heart beat went fast when you said ‘Hi,Zubair,this is Urvashi’. I was like stunned that’s why I could not converse properly.
In fact,I am not familiar with Suburban areas of Bombay. I know almost each and every place (restaurants etc.) of south Bombay.
I was about to leave for Delhi, the day I received your email. I travel a lot for my business. I cancelled my trip.
I wish to have dinner with you at any place you prefer. So, please call me and confirm the venue. I want to hear you sweet voice again. I am holding my mobile and waiting for your call.
Dear Urvashi, just keep in mind, I am very reliable and harmless person but not coward at all. So, don’t worry about anything.
Thanks for Your call and invitation. I am very sorry for not coming to ‘Rain’ or whatever it is. I was also hesitating and feeling shy in meeting you but I must have come there. It was a golden opportunity of meeting you.
Believe me,my heart beat went fast when you said ‘Hi,Zubair,this is Urvashi’. I was like stunned that’s why I could not converse properly.
In fact,I am not familiar with Suburban areas of Bombay. I know almost each and every place (restaurants etc.) of south Bombay.
I was about to leave for Delhi, the day I received your email. I travel a lot for my business. I cancelled my trip.
I wish to have dinner with you at any place you prefer. So, please call me and confirm the venue. I want to hear you sweet voice again. I am holding my mobile and waiting for your call.
Dear Urvashi, just keep in mind, I am very reliable and harmless person but not coward at all. So, don’t worry about anything.
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I hope I don't get in trouble for matchmaking on the internet, but: 'Hi Urvashi, Thanks for your call and invitation. I am very sorry for not coming to ‘Rain’ or whatever it was. I was hesitating and feeling shy in meeting you, but I should have come.
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I hope I don't get in trouble for matchmaking on the internet, but:
'Hi Urvashi,
Thanks for your call and invitation. I am very sorry for not coming to ‘Rain’ or whatever it was. I was hesitating and feeling shy in meeting you, but I should have come. It was a golden opportunity to meet you. I was about to leave for Delhi the day I received your email (I travel a lot for
'Hi Urvashi,
Thanks for your call and invitation. I am very sorry for not coming to ‘Rain’ or whatever it was. I was hesitating and feeling shy in meeting you, but I should have come. It was a golden opportunity to meet you. I was about to leave for Delhi the day I received your email (I travel a lot for
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