Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
can anyone polish my writing?
Hi, would appreciate if anyone could check my grammar? Thanks.
Short summary
After losing her brother in an illegal bike race, Alia hates seeing riders until she meets a mechanic named Zamri, who changes her view on bikers.
Long summary
A teenage girl named Alia had lost her elder brother Madi after an illegal motor racing. Since then, she hates teenagers involved in motorcycle drag races. However, her view starts to change after meeting a mechanic named Zamri.
Short summary
After losing her brother in an illegal bike race, Alia hates seeing riders until she meets a mechanic named Zamri, who changes her view on bikers.
Long summary
A teenage girl named Alia had lost her elder brother Madi after an illegal motor racing. Since then, she hates teenagers involved in motorcycle drag races. However, her view starts to change after meeting a mechanic named Zamri.
Top answer
Jenn123 After losing her brother in an illegal bike race, Alia hates develops an aversion to seeing bike riders until she meets a mechanic named Zamri, who changes her view on that. bikers. Jenn123 A teenage gir l, named Ali a, had lost loses her elder brothe r, Mad i, after an illegal moto rcycle rac e.
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