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Anita_a Posted 22 years ago

Bloom of Love

Her cheeks were rose
Her speech staggered
Her body shivered
Her fingers fumbled
Her eyes flickered
Her steps faltered
She surely wasn't ill
She had just seen
Him coming her way.
Her heart beat so fast
It would have given away!
Her body swayed
To the immortal tune
Of Eternal love
As four eyes met
Softly into Bliss.
  

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Give me a moment To express my love to you Let me tell you The feelings in my heart I’m deeply in love with you And want to forever Be in your proximity. Give me a little time To tell you how you Make me happy. You have taught me to smile You taught me to bring Glee into my life From everything I do.

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Give me a moment
To express my love to you
Let me tell you
The feelings in my heart
I’m deeply in love with you
And want to forever
Be in your proximity.

Give me a little time
To tell you how you
Make me happy.
You have taught me to smile
You taught me to bring
Glee into my life
From everything I do.
Don’t leave me now
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Anita, that is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us. I wish I could write something like this for my 'chico'.
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Hey Anita!
Do you mind if I 'borrow' the second one? Emotion: big smile
Thijs
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Sure. But only for you.... Not for publishing it anywhere,ok?!
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OK that's fine with me.
Thnx!
Thijs
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i really like the first one
it captures the mood really well
its adorable
imean, come on, weve all felt like that once

vb
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I'll never forget
when you and me
were holding together
listening to your whispers
in a foreign bed
in a wintry night
in a shared space
The embrace felt so red
So sorry if it hurt you in my head
So happy it pleased me to open up
to some undiscovered sensations
of what was a game to distract
my memories of having drunk of you
an icy
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Thanks VB. Maj, ur poem is really good.