Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
birthday
* Whose cell phone/hand phone is this?
- It's mine / It's Mary's / It's Tom's and Jim's.
* When is your birthday?
- It's on September, twenty-first/twenty-second/twenty-third/twenty-fourth/thirtieth/thirtieth-first.
Please help me correct the sentences above. Thanks very much to all Teachers.
BeoNga.
- It's mine / It's Mary's / It's Tom's and Jim's.
* When is your birthday?
- It's on September, twenty-first/twenty-second/twenty-third/twenty-fourth/thirtieth/thirtieth-first.
Please help me correct the sentences above. Thanks very much to all Teachers.
BeoNga.
Top answer
I'm afraid I'm not a teacher, but I'll try to help you. The mistakes I've found in your sentences are: *It's Tom's and Jim's CORRECT: It's Tom and Jim's *thirtieth-first CORRECT: thirty-first
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I'm afraid I'm not a teacher, but I'll try to help you.
The mistakes I've found in your sentences are:
*It's Tom's and Jim's
CORRECT: It's Tom and Jim's
*thirtieth-first
CORRECT: thirty-first
The mistakes I've found in your sentences are:
*It's Tom's and Jim's
CORRECT: It's Tom and Jim's
*thirtieth-first
CORRECT: thirty-first
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I agree with CP. Yet I wouldn't put a comma after September (in this case).