Anonymous Again, from something I'm editing for an internship, here is a sentence that I am thinking might sound better if slightly reworded: This may be the reason why mobile marketing has a five-times higher response rate than direct mail, [rest of the sentence not relevant]. If you insist, use "that", but not "why". Nothing is needed, really.
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AnonymousAgain, from something I'm editing for an internship, here is a sentence that I am thinking might sound better if slightly reworded:
This may be the reason why mobile marketing has a five-times higher response rate than direct mail, [rest of the sentence not relevant]. If you insist, use "that", but no