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Essay & Composition Writing
Be jealous of
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This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He is jealous. He wants everything that his friend has. ( or He is jealous of what his friends have.) However, he is is never lazy. He won’t take a rest until he finishes his work. His colleagues all admire his diligence.
This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He is jealous. He wants everything that his friend has. ( or He is jealous of what his friends have.) However, he is is never lazy. He won’t take a rest until he finishes his work. His colleagues all admire his diligence.
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This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He is jealous.
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This is my brother. He is a Scorpio. He is jealous. He wants everything that his friends have. ( or He is jealous of what his friends have.) However, he is is never lazy. He won’t take a rest until he finishes his work. His colleagues all admire his diligence.
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