Jewstin Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Awkward sentence - Do I need a comma/how can I fix this sentence?
As explained by Macdonald, Bennett, a school bus driver, argues that...
Macdonald and Bennett are two seperate people. Bennett is the school bus driver.
So I am summarizing what Macdonald reported about what Bennett argued.
Macdonald and Bennett are two seperate people. Bennett is the school bus driver.
So I am summarizing what Macdonald reported about what Bennett argued.
Top answer
Your sentence is fine as it is. Rover
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