Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Average essay
If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliche in this essay.
This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliche in this essay.
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Hi, If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments? This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive.
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Hi,
If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliches.in this essay
Clive
If you see any problems in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
This personal statement is mediocre. Even though it contains what is required in writing a personal statement, it is not impressive. There are too many cliches.
Clive
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