Asking for help: letter of motivation for intern in international org

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00I have written a letter of motivation. 02br
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00Is it ok from a native speaker's opinion?02br
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00Would you like to give me some advice?02br
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00Thank you very much.02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam:02br
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00With this letter, I would like to introduce my candidature for the XXXXXXX02br
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00I am a student enrolled in 00 to pursue my Master Degree in Economics. Now I am tremendously enjoying the school’s courses, especially those concerning Macroeconomics and Development Economics since I am determined to become better skilled in such field so that I can be better positioned in the future to serve my country, which is still a developing economy.02br
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00That’s why I would like to apply to the internship program. It will give me a precious opportunity to understand international problems and the working of the XXXXXX. Moreover, I am excited by the opportunity to work with a group of experts from whom I can learn not only professional skills but also insightful ideas about the world and the economy.00 02br
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00My friends know me to be a very effective and helpful team player. I enjoy learning from others and helping others where I can. My mastering of 3 UN official languages should be helpful in a multi-culture working environment, and former professional experience in financial service industry should help me to adapt quickly to the job assigned. 02br
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00Thank you for taking the time to consider my application for the internship, I look forward to hearing from you soon.02br
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