Asking for casual opinion

Hello...

Sorry, this is not a question about grammar.....
Just asking for casual opinion...

Which would you prefer among (A) and (B)?


(A)
Wishing not to have
so much as a speck of shame
toward heaven until the day I die,
I suffered, even when the wind sitrred the leaves.

With my heart singing to the stars,
I shall love all things that are dying.
And I must walk the road
that has been given to me.

Tonight, again, the stars are
brushed by the wind.


(B)
Lest I shall have a hint of shame
until death comes to me,
I mourned even to the wind on leaves.

With my heart that sings the stars,
I will love all the mortals that are dying,
and walk the path allotted to me.

This night too,
star stands being touched by the wind.