1) The children asked Father Christmas for a house on wheels. I found that we use ASK FOR to make a request for help, advice, information. So I understand the sentence is wrong.
Is the following correction right?
They asked Father Christmas to bring them a house on wheels. (I understand this is correct).
Any other suggestion? Thank you.
2) There is a story that says that the main character found a job that included a home.
The person who was retelling the story (11 years old) said: John got a job and a house, because the house came with the salary. I understand this is completely wrong.
What do you think about my correction?
xxx got a job and a house because the house was included in the salary. I know it sounds better to say that the job included a home, but I want to use his idea.
Do you agree? any suggestion.
Thank you
Top answer
Hi, Could someone help me, please? 1) The children asked Father Christmas for a house on wheels. I found that we use ASK FOR to make a request for help, advice, information.
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1) The children asked Father Christmas for a house on wheels. I found that we use ASK FOR to make a request for help, advice, information. So I understand the sentence is wrong.
It's fine. we simply ask for something when we want something. eg Tom asked Mary for a dollar.
I would be interested in who told you that your #1 and #2 were wrong, Soprano. As Clive says, the structures are not only correct, but they are also very common and natural.