Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Could anyone (a native speaker) check the following text in English? Many thanks in advance:
WELCOME TO SOCHI
Some information about Sochi, you might not know.
Sochi - one of the southern cities of Russia.
Sochi – the only city in Russia, which territory is covered with such trees as: magnolias; eucalyptus; southern species of palms. Also, the following rare species of fruits and vegetations grow in Sochi: pineapple guavas, figs, loquats, tea.
Sochi - the second in the list of the longest cities of the world - 148 kilometers. First - Mexico, it stretches along – 200 kilometers.
Sochi - the only city in Russia which combines a mild climate of humid subtropics with a climate of the Caucasus Mountains. Such combination creates a unique natural environment ideal for different kind of leisure and health improvement.
Sochi – a SPA resort for curing the following: gynecological and skin diseases; disabilities of the nervous and cardiovascular systems, musculoskeletal disabilities and sports rehabilitation.
Sochi - beach and ski resort, which offers such activities as: yachting and sailing, rafting, jeeping, tracking, cliff climbing, camping, heli-ski and other.
Sochi - host of Winter Olympic Games 2014, Formula 1, FIFA 2018.
WELCOME TO SOCHI
Some information about Sochi, you might not know.
Sochi - one of the southern cities of Russia.
Sochi – the only city in Russia, which territory is covered with such trees as: magnolias; eucalyptus; southern species of palms. Also, the following rare species of fruits and vegetations grow in Sochi: pineapple guavas, figs, loquats, tea.
Sochi - the second in the list of the longest cities of the world - 148 kilometers. First - Mexico, it stretches along – 200 kilometers.
Sochi - the only city in Russia which combines a mild climate of humid subtropics with a climate of the Caucasus Mountains. Such combination creates a unique natural environment ideal for different kind of leisure and health improvement.
Sochi – a SPA resort for curing the following: gynecological and skin diseases; disabilities of the nervous and cardiovascular systems, musculoskeletal disabilities and sports rehabilitation.
Sochi - beach and ski resort, which offers such activities as: yachting and sailing, rafting, jeeping, tracking, cliff climbing, camping, heli-ski and other.
Sochi - host of Winter Olympic Games 2014, Formula 1, FIFA 2018.
Top answer
WELCOME TO SOCHI ! Some information about Soc hi y ou might not know: Sochi is a southern Russian city. Soc hi is th e only city in Russia which has such trees as magnolias, eucalyptus, and southern palms, as well as tropical f ruits an d vegetables such as pineapples, guavas, figs, loquats, and tea.
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WELCOME TO SOCHI !
Some information about Sochi you might not know:
Sochi is a southern Russian city.
Sochi is the only city in Russia which has such trees as magnolias, eucalyptus, and southern palms, as well as tropical fruits and vegetables such as pineapples, guavas, figs, loquats, and tea.
Some information about Sochi you might not know:
Sochi is a southern Russian city.
Sochi is the only city in Russia which has such trees as magnolias, eucalyptus, and southern palms, as well as tropical fruits and vegetables such as pineapples, guavas, figs, loquats, and tea.
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