Surface Dweller Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Are there any errors in this sentence?

She's the flame that burns bright in the overwhelming darkness that is my life
  

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It needs a full stop, but otherwise it is correct English. I do slightly question whether "overwhelming darkness" can exist in the presence of a "flame that burns bright".

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It needs a full stop, but otherwise it is correct English. I do slightly question whether "overwhelming darkness" can exist in the presence of a "flame that burns bright".