Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Are my sentences correct?
Hello, here is part of a dialogues in my short story. Can you tell me if I have the grammar correct?
"I'm fine, son. It takes more than a female to defeat me."
"I don't know, dad. She was beating you pretty good."
"Son, looks can be deceiving. Lets keep this little incident between you and me, no need to tell your mother."
"Ah, she already knows."
"What! What do you mean?"
"She called me on my cell-phone. She wanted to know why we were so late getting home."
"Alex!" Carmelia sharp voice rang in his ear. Alex spun around fear shot up his spine. He would have given anything to be somewhere else.
"I'm fine, son. It takes more than a female to defeat me."
"I don't know, dad. She was beating you pretty good."
"Son, looks can be deceiving. Lets keep this little incident between you and me, no need to tell your mother."
"Ah, she already knows."
"What! What do you mean?"
"She called me on my cell-phone. She wanted to know why we were so late getting home."
"Alex!" Carmelia sharp voice rang in his ear. Alex spun around fear shot up his spine. He would have given anything to be somewhere else.
Top answer
These need the corrections indicated: "I don't know, Dad . " "Son, looks can be deceiving. Let's keep this little incident between you and me.
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These need the corrections indicated:
"I don't know, Dad. She was beating you pretty good."
"Son, looks can be deceiving. Let's keep this little incident between you and me. No need to tell your mother."
"What? What do you mean?"
"She called me on my cellphone. She wanted to know why we were so late getting home.
These need the corrections indicated:
"I don't know, Dad. She was beating you pretty good."
"Son, looks can be deceiving. Let's keep this little incident between you and me. No need to tell your mother."
"What? What do you mean?"
"She called me on my cellphone. She wanted to know why we were so late getting home.
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