0Hi all, 02br 00Would somebody please help me with the English?02br 00Regards,02br 02br 00Calvin02br 02br 00Dear Sir or Madam02br 02br 02br 02br 00I should like to apply for the post of Assistant Marketing Manager at your company that was advertised in the South China Morning Post on February 1, 2007.02br 02br 02br 02br 00I have worked as a senior sales engineer in electronic products for five years.00 00My responsibility is to prepare budgets for suppliers and to monitor sales team activities.00 00With a Bachelor degree in electronic engineering from 00, I am equipped to analyze technical reports and to train other junior sales engineers in my group.00 00Three of them are from 010200 and are based in Shenzhen.00 00I made regular visits twice weekly, sometimes staying over the weekend to complete my assigned duties.00 00My Putonghua proficiency adequate to meet business needs.00 00I have also studied English writing skills for business during 2006.00 00I am a person with self imitative and can work independently.00 00I therefore I can be an asset to your company.02br 02br 00My present salary is HKD15,000 and expected salary is HKD18,000.02br 02br 02br 02br 00I look forward to the opportunity of answering any questions you may have regarding my application.00 00I would be pleased to attend an interview providing you could give me at least two days’ notice.00 00My contact number is 1234567.02br 02br 02br 02br 00Yours faithfully,02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 00Calvin02br 02br 02br 02br 00Encl. résumé02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 02br 0-
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0I suggest that you include a CV/resume with your letter. 02br 02br 00I have worked as a senior sales engineer in electronic products for five years. My responsibility is to prepare budgets for suppliers and to monitor sales team activities.
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0I suggest that you include a CV/resume with your letter. If you do, you should add 'I enclose my CV for your attention' to your letter.02br 02br 00I 01b00would02b00 like to apply for the post of Assistant Marketing Manager at your company01b00,02b00 that was advertised in the South China Morning Post on February 1, 2007.02br