Application for Loan!!!

Would you please make correction if required in this letter ?

Subject: Request for Loan.



Dear Sir,



With due respect, I would like to inform you that I am in need of some urgent financial assistance. Please grant me $. 40,000/= (Dollars Forty thousand only) as a loan.



I would therefore request you to please consider my request sympathetically. I would be very grateful to you for your kind attention and obliged.



Thanking you,



Yours faithfully,