Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Application for admission request
I need to write an application for admission request of my younger brother.
I will be greatly thankful if you can let me know what should I add and remove , grammatical errors or any better vocabulary I can use.
Sir ,
My name is xxxx , I am a ex-student of your shool, I am a passout of 2013 batch.
I am writing this to request for admission of my younger brother. He is currently studying in xxxxx. He is currently about to complete his class 2 and will be promoted to class 3 soon.
I was seeking his admission as he has always dreamed about studying in his brothers school from his childhood. Even I get more connected to the college in this way.
Last time when I visted college , I found that new admission vacancys are only for boarding house.
I will be greatly thankful if you can grant his admission in Class 3 as a days scholar. I am looking forward for your reply.
I will be greatly thankful if you can let me know what should I add and remove , grammatical errors or any better vocabulary I can use.
Sir ,
My name is xxxx , I am a ex-student of your shool, I am a passout of 2013 batch.
I am writing this to request for admission of my younger brother. He is currently studying in xxxxx. He is currently about to complete his class 2 and will be promoted to class 3 soon.
I was seeking his admission as he has always dreamed about studying in his brothers school from his childhood. Even I get more connected to the college in this way.
Last time when I visted college , I found that new admission vacancys are only for boarding house.
I will be greatly thankful if you can grant his admission in Class 3 as a days scholar. I am looking forward for your reply.
Top answer
Dear Sir: My name is xxxx and I graduated from (name of college) in 2013. I am writing on behalf of my younger brother, who is currently studying in (name of college). He is finishing Class 2 and will soon be promoted to Class 3.
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Dear Sir:
My name is xxxx and I graduated from (name of college) in 2013.
I am writing on behalf of my younger brother, who is currently studying in (name of college). He is finishing Class 2 and will soon be promoted to Class 3. Since childhood, he has dreamed about studying in the same college as his brother. I also would enjoy the knowledge that he was following in my footsteps.
My name is xxxx and I graduated from (name of college) in 2013.
I am writing on behalf of my younger brother, who is currently studying in (name of college). He is finishing Class 2 and will soon be promoted to Class 3. Since childhood, he has dreamed about studying in the same college as his brother. I also would enjoy the knowledge that he was following in my footsteps.
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