Ana Nhi Posted 10 years ago
Business & Finance
anyone please help and correct the application letter...
Dear...
I am writing to express my interest in the .... position that is currently available with your company in the ...office. As a final-year student at the .... with a major in Accounting and concentrations in Auditing, I have maintained a... GPA and will be eligible to sit for the CFAB in December 2017. I feel that I possess the technical and education skills make me a competitive candidate.
During the summer, I participated in some workshops on auditing, where able to meet and exchange with some professional auditors and learn more about this area. I took away many great tips about networking and communication skills that I am now using in my daily life. By researching information about Grant Thornton, I really enjoy learning more about the services, culture, and people in there. I believe the company could provide me the values that I need and like to work for.
I also work at the..... as Finance team leader. I guided and divided the role for each member; Supported members for contacting, negotiating and signing with sponsors. Besides, I am a member of the Executive Committee of Vietnamese students' association of the class KN456 in university. I gained leadership skills and knowledge about professional mannerisms that further developed my skills. My experiences as both leader and member of the Executive Committee are some of the things that I can offer to the internship position.
I attached CV for your review as well. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to meeting you and discussing the position as the audit intern.
Sincerely,
...
Many thanks.
I am writing to express my interest in the .... position that is currently available with your company in the ...office. As a final-year student at the .... with a major in Accounting and concentrations in Auditing, I have maintained a... GPA and will be eligible to sit for the CFAB in December 2017. I feel that I possess the technical and education skills make me a competitive candidate.
During the summer, I participated in some workshops on auditing, where able to meet and exchange with some professional auditors and learn more about this area. I took away many great tips about networking and communication skills that I am now using in my daily life. By researching information about Grant Thornton, I really enjoy learning more about the services, culture, and people in there. I believe the company could provide me the values that I need and like to work for.
I also work at the..... as Finance team leader. I guided and divided the role for each member; Supported members for contacting, negotiating and signing with sponsors. Besides, I am a member of the Executive Committee of Vietnamese students' association of the class KN456 in university. I gained leadership skills and knowledge about professional mannerisms that further developed my skills. My experiences as both leader and member of the Executive Committee are some of the things that I can offer to the internship position.
I attached CV for your review as well. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to meeting you and discussing the position as the audit intern.
Sincerely,
...
Many thanks.
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I am writing to express my interest in the .... office. As a final-year student at the ....
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I am writing to express my interest in the .... position that is currently available with your company in the ...office. As a final-year student at the .... with a major in accounting and concentrations a minor in auditing, I have maintained a... GPA and will be eligible to sit for the CFAB in December 2017. I feel that I possess the theoretical knowledge and
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teechrThe highlighted text is unclear. I suggest you rephrase it.Hi teechr, thanks so much for your help.
The highlighted text is point one of our position at school/ university in my country. The Executive Committee include people who head in any association.
The second sentence I want to talk about the helpful of these positions: leadership sk
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Ana NhiBesides, I am a member of the Executive Committee of the Vietnamese Student Association ofI think that second sentence is redundant.theclass KN456 in university.I gained leadership skills and knowledge about professional mannerisms that further developed my skills.
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