Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Considering that in October, 2014 Safer Internet programme was finalized, it is planned that from 2015 a new project will be implemented within the framework of European Union Connecting Europe Facility 2014-2020 programme, which provides 50% State co-financing and 50% European Comission co-financing, so that it would be possible to continue to implement activities in the Netherlands related to safer Internet.
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Are there any gramatical mistakes in this sentence?
Considering that in October, 2014 Safer Internet programme was finalized, it is planned that from 2015 a new project will be implemented within the framework of European Union Connecting Europe Facility 2014-2020 programme, which provides 50% State co-financing and 50% European Comission co-financing, so that it would be possible to continue to implement activities in the Netherlands related to safer Internet.
Thank you!
Top answer
I would suggest that related to safer Internet be placed right after "activities". Note: While I don't like short, choppy sentences, I try to avoid super long ones as well.
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I would suggest that related to safer Internet be placed right after "activities". Note: While I don't like short, choppy sentences, I try to avoid super long ones as well.
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