Any error in there?

First time posting here, I'm writing a "poetry" for my girlfriend. I'll use it in a "kinetic typography", a beautiful way to say "I love you", I hope. Is there any error? Help me, please!

"Everytime I watch into your eyes... I see a Dream begun a month ago. I hope this Dream will never end because you are so f*cking special, I don't want to leave this fable cause you are a fallen star. I will help you, I won't hurt you, I will try to be like you. I can't handle when you're distant, I can cry for a goodbye, but I'll never leave you alone, it's a promise from my heart. When we are togheter I can see a piece of Heaven, and the only way I can feel that is by keeping your small hands. I wish I could stay with you, my honey, everytime I need to cry, but the time we pass togheter is the best I'll ever find. Thanks for all the things you've done and for all you're going to do, I don't think I'd breath alone, but I'm safe because of you!"

Thanks!