Persona Grata Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
another's diary.
This is another's diary.
plz correct it~:)
hello!! everybody!!
i'm in frankfrut, germany. hihi.
(if spell is wrong, please close your eye. -_-;)
do everybody live heathy? well? hhh
i'm very missed koreapas and koreapas's people. (4dlf dksgoTdmf Qnsdlsep...EhdcPdls-_-)
europe's internet cafe is too expensive. 2000 won per 1hr
but this hotel's internet is free. hhh but only one computer......T-T
p.s thank to jung-sin-an-cha-ryu nim hh for san-gak-dea
foreigners are very curious and interested about this sam-gak-dae.
and very useful, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you
and now is 6. am in korea????
is there any people now!?!?!?? kk
plz correct it~:)
hello!! everybody!!
i'm in frankfrut, germany. hihi.
(if spell is wrong, please close your eye. -_-;)
do everybody live heathy? well? hhh
i'm very missed koreapas and koreapas's people. (4dlf dksgoTdmf Qnsdlsep...EhdcPdls-_-)
europe's internet cafe is too expensive. 2000 won per 1hr
but this hotel's internet is free. hhh but only one computer......T-T
p.s thank to jung-sin-an-cha-ryu nim hh for san-gak-dea
foreigners are very curious and interested about this sam-gak-dae.
and very useful, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you
and now is 6. am in korea????
is there any people now!?!?!?? kk
Top answer
Why don't you have a go agt correcting it yourself It's very informally written. To start with, the sentences need to start with capital letters and all the proper nouns need capital letters. Other than that, a couple of the verbs need sorting out.
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Why don't you have a go agt correcting it yourself 
It's very informally written. To start with, the sentences need to star
It's very informally written. To start with, the sentences need to star
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