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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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Anna has also called you several times but I think you weren't around.

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01font00May this email find you in good state of health. I have been trying to email you for last couple of days but my computer was not working. Anna has also called you several times but I think you weren't around. I know things will be terrible on your end. I can feel what you are going through. I could have called you but I thought you might mind me calling you. Sarah, you can't take John out of your mind at least for next couple of months, even if you try your very best. I know you love him very, very much. See, you were prepared to change your entire life for him; to abandon your ambitions, to leave USA where you were raised, and to get so far away from all your friends; I do believe you are still ready to do everything for him. I'm sorry to say this, Sarah, but don't you think he isn't worth of your love? He isn't a right guy for a smart and nice girl like you. I know that you can't forget him and perhaps every memory of him will make you cry out. Every person will say the same thing that it's good he left you because he was not a good guy for you. But I know you wouldn't be able to forget him. My dear sister, do one thing DON'T waste time; follow your ambitions, study hard, and love your parents and friends. I know this will be hard but this is called life, my dear. I think Anna will visit you soon. If she couldn't then please you do come to California. I'm sure intelligent and smart girl like you will find a guy who will be ready to do everything for you. Here I would like to add a quote:02font02br
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0Hi Clive,02br
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00Yes. Just compare to the original.02br
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0Hi Jackson,02br
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00I made a lot of other changes. You need to compare it to the original more carefully.05002br
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0Hi Clive,02br
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00Surely, I will compare that text to the original one. But it could have been very easy to trace the corrections if you had used some different colour for corrections.0-
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0Hi Jackson,02br
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00I spent part of my evening giving you corrections, and I was happy to do it. However, doing it in a more detailed way would have taken more of my time.02br
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00By the way, you forgot to thank me.05002br
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10Hi Jackson,12br
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10I spent part of my evening giving you corrections, and I was happy to do it. However, doing it in a more detailed way would have taken more of my time.12br
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10By the way, you forgot to thank me.15012br
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01font01b01font00Surely02font02b00, I will compare that text to the original one. But it could 01b01font00have been02font
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