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My soul_my eyes Posted 21 years ago

And so it ends

0 These sins came to be a part of me 02br
00Over and over 02br
00These circles are neverending 02br
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00If only you would take my hand 02br
00All i wanted was you to understand 02br
00These feelings have been locked 02br
00in my heart shaped box 02br
00Taunting me 02br
00Haunting me 02br
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00Wait 02br
00I thought you already had a key 02br
00To slip inside 02br
00Rather, you found the key 02br
00and left me to hide 02br
00Oh how jaded, you have left me 02br
00Hiding from your tainted smile 02br
00My eyes wont rest 02br
00Was winning all that was at stake? 02br
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00Well nevermind, who did who wrong 02br
00I tried to breakthrough, but you shut me out 02br
00Sharade, Sharade 02br
00I cant play this sharade 02br
00Its breaking my heart 0-
  

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0 The poem reflects a lot of pain, hurt & deep feelings. Try & punctuate it - punctuation always gives punch & helps the reader understand better. 02br 02br 00benita 0-

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0 The poem reflects a lot of pain, hurt & deep feelings. Try & punctuate it - punctuation always gives punch & helps the reader understand better. 02br
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