Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
An incident happened in school
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Peter was a responsible boy. Last Monday afternoon, he was on the duty / he guarded the school compound. Suddenly, he heard some shouting (coming) from the field. He saw two Year Six pupils bullying a boy from Year 1 in the field.
He walked over and gave them advice, but they ignored (him). He quickly ran to the office and iniformed the discipline teacher. She was very annoyed about this incident.
The teacher asked them came to the office and scolded them for their wrong doings. Finally / At last, she punished them severely. The boys regretted and apologised to the boy and teacher.
Peter was a responsible boy. Last Monday afternoon, he was on the duty / he guarded the school compound. Suddenly, he heard some shouting (coming) from the field. He saw two Year Six pupils bullying a boy from Year 1 in the field.
He walked over and gave them advice, but they ignored (him). He quickly ran to the office and iniformed the discipline teacher. She was very annoyed about this incident.
The teacher asked them came to the office and scolded them for their wrong doings. Finally / At last, she punished them severely. The boys regretted and apologised to the boy and teacher.
Top answer
he was on duty monitoring the school compound. In the field, he saw two sixth graders bullying a first grader. The teacher called them to the office and scolded them for their wrongdoing.
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he was on duty monitoring the school compound.
In the field, he saw two sixth graders bullying a first grader.
The teacher called them to the office and scolded them for their wrongdoing. Then, she punished them severely.
The boys regretted their actions, and apologized to the boy and to the teacher.
In the field, he saw two sixth graders bullying a first grader.
The teacher called them to the office and scolded them for their wrongdoing. Then, she punished them severely.
The boys regretted their actions, and apologized to the boy and to the teacher.
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