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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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According to one of teacher, this sentence does not make sense. What can I do to make it right?

University is a totally new experience. Traveling to a foreign country, especially a country like Japan without doubt values its history and culture would indeed be gratifying.
  

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University is a totally new experience. Traveling to a foreign country, especially a country like Japan , which, without doubt , values its history and culture , would indeed be gratifying. The core of your sentence is this: Traveling to a foreign country would indeed be gratifying.

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University is a totally new experience. Traveling to a foreign country, especially a country like Japan, which, without doubt, values its history and culture, would indeed be gratifying.

The core of your sentence is this:

Traveling to a foreign country would indeed be gratifying.

The parenthetical (nonessential) elements need to be properly formed in