Kedra Posted 19 years ago
Science & IT
Access to admin area of the software. Thank you!
1 i 00 My company sells rental management software. We've set up the demo version and want to give an acess to admin panel of it to those, who are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse or gamage of the demo, we do not want to publish admin acess login/password right at the login page. Instead, we ask those, who are interested in seeing the admin area, to drop up a line and we'll send them login/password. Below is how I inform visitors about it. Please check if it's grammatically correct. Does it sound ok? Which one is better?Thank you very much in advance! [A] 02 i 02 br
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02 br 02 br 01 i 00 My company sells rental management software. We've set up 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 demo version and want to 01 b 00 give access 02 b 00 to 01 b 00 its 02 b 00 admin panel to 01 b 00 those who 02 b 00 are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse or 01 b 00 damage 02 b 00 of the demo, we do not want to publish 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 admin acess login/password right at the login page.
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02 br 01 i 00 My company sells rental management software. We've set up 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 demo version and want to 01 b 00 give access 02 b 00 to 01 b 00 its 02 b 00 admin panel to 01 b 00 those who 02 b 00 are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse
02 br 01 i 00 My company sells rental management software. We've set up 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 demo version and want to 01 b 00 give access 02 b 00 to 01 b 00 its 02 b 00 admin panel to 01 b 00 those who 02 b 00 are interested. But to reduce the risk of possible deletion, misuse
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