Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A visit to a plant nursery
Please help to check, thanks.
Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscus, sunflowers, water lilies and some more. One windy afternoon, Lynda followed her family to visit a plant nursery near Ampang.
While reaching the nursery, Lynda saw a wide variety of attractive plants there. They walked around and chose a few bonsai they like. They also found some unique and special plants there. The flowers are beautiful and attractive.
After buying the bonsai, her father went to an accessories nursury shop. He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them. Her father decided to plant them in his backyard. Her mother would also give some bonsai for their neighbours.
Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscus, sunflowers, water lilies and some more. One windy afternoon, Lynda followed her family to visit a plant nursery near Ampang.
While reaching the nursery, Lynda saw a wide variety of attractive plants there. They walked around and chose a few bonsai they like. They also found some unique and special plants there. The flowers are beautiful and attractive.
After buying the bonsai, her father went to an accessories nursury shop. He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them. Her father decided to plant them in his backyard. Her mother would also give some bonsai for their neighbours.
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Hi , Vincent, I am really happy to se that you are starting to write essays. This will be very good for your English. Please ask if there are any corrections that you don't understand.
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Hi ,
Vincent, I am really happy to se that you are starting to write essays. This will be very good for your English.
Please ask if there are any corrections that you don't understand.
Clive
Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscuses, sunflowers and water li
Vincent, I am really happy to se that you are starting to write essays. This will be very good for your English.
Please ask if there are any corrections that you don't understand.
Clive
Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscuses, sunflowers and water li
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Thanks, for the questions that I want to ask:
(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.
(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.
What can I write after that? how to m
(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.
(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.
What can I write after that? how to m
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Hi,
for the questions that I want to ask:
(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.
The store had everything they needed.
(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.
for the questions that I want to ask:
(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.
The store had everything they needed.
(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.
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