Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
a very short letter-have to send it today....please help
Hi:) I am wondering if you could check my e-mail to the recruitment officer with whom I spoke last week. I gave him my CV and he sent it to the potential employer. I would like to know what decision they made. Therefore, I wrote an informal e-mail to the recruitment ofiicer. I'll be pleased if you could help me to improve it. Thank you:)
Dear John,
I tried to catch you in the office today but unfortunately you were out. I am just wondering whether you are still considering me as a candidate for the position of Data Entry Clerk. I yes, I would like to confirm that I am still available and able to start immediately.
Regards,
Dear John,
I tried to catch you in the office today but unfortunately you were out. I am just wondering whether you are still considering me as a candidate for the position of Data Entry Clerk. I yes, I would like to confirm that I am still available and able to start immediately.
Regards,
Top answer
Your grammar is fine, but may I suggest: Dear John, I tried to reach you in the office today, but unfortunately you were out. I wanted to aks whether I am still a candidate for the Data Entry Clerk position. I so, I would like to confirm that I am still very interested.
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Your grammar is fine, but may I suggest:
Dear John,
I tried to reach you in the office today, but unfortunately you were out. I wanted to aks whether I am still a candidate for the Data Entry Clerk position. I so, I would like to confirm that I am still very interested.
Good luck with your job hunt!
Dear John,
I tried to reach you in the office today, but unfortunately you were out. I wanted to aks whether I am still a candidate for the Data Entry Clerk position. I so, I would like to confirm that I am still very interested.
Good luck with your job hunt!
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