Saltukhan Posted 17 years ago
Business & Finance
A text for telling cv
hey people
i need some correction and some advices.
i have some paragraphs but i think that these paragraphs can be more effective and more literarisch.
What do you advise? How could we make these better? I need to find a way tell this in a more effective style.
"I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
In 2007, i started to adminstration and management internships in Kadim . Kadim is a manufacturer of decorative radiators. I learnt management skills, applications and politics of the firm."
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"During my education i started to work in Xel Chemicals. Xel is manufacturer of constructional paints. I started to work in 2007. I worked as a domectic and international sales responsible. I prepared marketing reports. I had phone calls with customers ( domestic or foreign). I provided requirements of customers.
I started to Mascoline Co. in June, Istanbul. I worked in Mascoline Co. as purchasing export import responsible for 2,5 months. 2 months officially, half month unofficially
I was dealing with international trade jobs. I prepared export documents. I performed purchasing processes. I was the charged person to provide coordination between planning, quality control, logistics and production departments."
best regards
i need some correction and some advices.
i have some paragraphs but i think that these paragraphs can be more effective and more literarisch.
What do you advise? How could we make these better? I need to find a way tell this in a more effective style.
"I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
In 2007, i started to adminstration and management internships in Kadim . Kadim is a manufacturer of decorative radiators. I learnt management skills, applications and politics of the firm."
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"During my education i started to work in Xel Chemicals. Xel is manufacturer of constructional paints. I started to work in 2007. I worked as a domectic and international sales responsible. I prepared marketing reports. I had phone calls with customers ( domestic or foreign). I provided requirements of customers.
I started to Mascoline Co. in June, Istanbul. I worked in Mascoline Co. as purchasing export import responsible for 2,5 months. 2 months officially, half month unofficially
I was dealing with international trade jobs. I prepared export documents. I performed purchasing processes. I was the charged person to provide coordination between planning, quality control, logistics and production departments."
best regards
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sorry i realised some mistakes some kind of computer error has occured here i have to write it again i need your advices still I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
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sorry i realised some mistakes
some kind of computer error has occured here
i have to write it again
i need your advices still
I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
In 2007, i started to adminstration and management internships in Kadim . Kadim is a manufactu
some kind of computer error has occured here
i have to write it again
i need your advices still
I completed my first internship in Zti Çelik. Zti Çelik is a Ford Otosan supplier. I worked here to get used to workshop machines.
In 2007, i started to adminstration and management internships in Kadim . Kadim is a manufactu
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