I have to write a formal letter to defer my commencement, and I am not good at wrting it. This is important for me and I have to do it asap. The thing is there is no one that I could ask around me. I was wondering if anyone could help me. This is what I've written :
Ciangsana, F 22/24 Kab.Bogor, Indonesia Karin Zitoya
December 12, 2016
The University of Queensland Admission Committee St Lucia Queensland 4072, Australia
Dear Sir/Madam, My Name Is Karin Zitoya (Applicant #12345678). I was recently accepting a Conditional Offer for Master Communication Program in The University of Queensland. I am absolutely thrilled about this news. However, I am writing this letter to defer my commencement from Semester 1 (February, 2017) to Semester 2 (July, 2017).
My reason for deferment is due to some financial restrains. During my deferment, I am planning to get a scholarship and others plan that will put me in solid financial state.
Please let me know of I can provide any additional information. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Karin Zitoya
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The University of Queensland Admissions Office St Lucia Queensland 4072, Australia Dear Sir/Madam, My Name Is Karin Zitoya (Applicant #12345678). I recently accepted a conditional offer for the Master of Communication Program at The University of Queensland. I am very much committed to registering for that program.
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The University of Queensland Admissions Office St Lucia Queensland 4072, Australia
Dear Sir/Madam,
My Name Is Karin Zitoya (Applicant #12345678). I recently accepted a conditional offer for the Master of Communication Program at The University of Queensland. I am very much committed to registering for that program. However, due to some financial issues, I wish to defer my