a good sense for details

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Two connected housings made of titanium and containing vintage elements of the maritime instruments will delight anybody who has a good sense for details. There are lot of details, so no doubt that you will immediately notice this kind of watch on somebody's wrist, but only the connisseurs will discover that the upper housing contains tachymeter and three dials, as details from chronograph.