Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
A Clean-up Day
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Last Monday morning, there was a Clean-up day held in St. Theresa School. All pupils were divided into a few groups. We all brought all the cleaning equipments like damp cloths, pails, sickles, brooms and so on. The headmaster gave us a short briefing before having / starting a spring cleaning. We all listened attentively.
After ten minutes, we followed the instructions of teachers to do cleaning / the work. Pupils in Group A swept the floors and mopped the classrooms thoroughly. Some wipe the window panes and cleaned the blackboards respectively. They cooperated with each other / among themselves and managed to fulfill their tasks.
The pupils of Group B cleaned the drains the clogged drains and cut the tall grass. Some pupils from Group C arranged the flower pots along the corridors while some / others painted the school gate.
All of us worked happily and even forgot the tiredness. Although we all felt exhausted, we were enjoybale. After a few hours, our school looked / seemed clean and tidy. It's our pride of caring our school. Our hard work (had) paid off.
Last Monday morning, there was a Clean-up day held in St. Theresa School. All pupils were divided into a few groups. We all brought all the cleaning equipments like damp cloths, pails, sickles, brooms and so on. The headmaster gave us a short briefing before having / starting a spring cleaning. We all listened attentively.
After ten minutes, we followed the instructions of teachers to do cleaning / the work. Pupils in Group A swept the floors and mopped the classrooms thoroughly. Some wipe the window panes and cleaned the blackboards respectively. They cooperated with each other / among themselves and managed to fulfill their tasks.
The pupils of Group B cleaned the drains the clogged drains and cut the tall grass. Some pupils from Group C arranged the flower pots along the corridors while some / others painted the school gate.
All of us worked happily and even forgot the tiredness. Although we all felt exhausted, we were enjoybale. After a few hours, our school looked / seemed clean and tidy. It's our pride of caring our school. Our hard work (had) paid off.
Top answer
Last Monday morning, there was a c lean-up day (if it was a named day, then you can capitalize the entire phrase - Clean-up Day) held in St. Theresa School. All pupils were divided into a few groups.
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Last Monday morning, there was a clean-up day (if it was a named day, then you can capitalize the entire phrase - Clean-up Day) held in St. Theresa School. All pupils were divided into a few groups. We all brought all the cleaning equipments (equipment is noncount) like damp cloths, pails, sickles, brooms and so on. The headmaster gave us a short briefing before
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