4 little sentences i need help with please

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Could someone look at this for me please?

1 When we go to the restaurant we each pay for our own part.
2 She might be prettier to/in my eyes than to your eyes because I'm in love with her.
3 Do you know what time this place is open till?
4 How much discount do you get as in employee here when you want to eat here.
5 When its complete silence at night, things could be heard better than when its silent during the day.

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Alc24 · Accepted Answer

Could anyone help me with this please?
thank you

BarbaraPA · Answer

That's 5 sentences, but okay. Still better than your 10, 11, 14... and more, which, by the way, I won't even look at because they're so long.

alc24Could someone look at this for me please?

1 When we go to the restaurant, we each pay for our own ~~part~~ meal. (Or: we each pay our own way.)
2 She might be prettier to/in my eyes than ~~to your eyes~~ yours because I'm in love with her.
3 Do you know what time this place is open till? Try this: Do you know how late this place is open?
4 How much discount do you get as in employee here when you want to eat here. Try this: What is the employee discount here?
5 When its complete silence at night, things could be heard better than when its silent during the day. When it's completely silent at night, you can hear things better than when it's silent during the day. (That doesn't make any sense. If it's completely silent, what is there to hear??)

thanks

Alc24 · Answer

Thank you GG

one question, for number 3 my way is wrong? Have you ever heard anyone say that?

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BarbaraPA · Answer

I wouldn't say your #3 is wrong, but it sounds awkward to me.

4 little sentences i need help with please

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